WE planned it on prezi and we wrote are first draft.
Here is the link to my prezi https://prezi.com/p/w591la8q_5fk/
Here is my first draft.
Draft 1
I wake up to the sound of my dog echo barking. “Well I survived another night in this wasteland” I think to myself. Echo jumps onto my lap and starts to bark. “Fine I’ll feed you” Echo jumps onto the ground and goes out side. I grab her food and go outside. Echo is not there I call to her a couple of times but she doesn’t come. It's not like her to ignore food so I go investigate but before i know it i’m falling through a black void. The ground comes faster than expected but it didn’t hurt but there's echo peeing on a tree I look at her then she starts to bark and run into an open field. I run after her when i catch up echo is sniffing another dog it is black with a white stripe down its face. I walk out to get echo but I see a girl standing there she seems scared so I raise my arms and move towards her she looks innocent. I ask her “where am I?”
she replied by saying “You are on my farm trespassing so state your business or get lost”
I apologise. “It is fine” she replies “but who are you?”
I tell her that “I am logan this is my dog Echo and I came from a world where a massive disaster took place and that I fell through a hole and landed here. She was a bit curious at first but I think she believes it. “Who are you I ask” “Mary Kimberly Rice and this is my dog Tiny “ she replies. We go back to her house to find and smoking pile of ash. I try to tell her who did this but I don’t think she heard me. “ This has to the work of the slimy son of a weasel David” “What are you babbling on about?” she asks me. “I know who did this” “WELL LET'S GO KILL HIM!!!!! She screams angrily. “Ok... are you sure?” “Deadly” she replies “When do we leave?” She asks. “Now?” I reply. How do we get there? I don’t know I reply How about we check where I fell out of. We walk to roughly were i fell out of. Our dogs are acting like their best friends or something. Well here it is. Lets go Mary says hesitantly. Stop are you sure that you want to do this it could be dangerous?
I have nothing to go back to. Ok let's go then we jump in with the dogs following close behind us. It doesn’t take too long to arrive but Mary takes a little longer but it is her first time. We land on a island in space and time. We start to look around a big cloud of dust appears for like two seconds as the cloud goes away a figure appears he is a normal looking man in a suit holding a briefcase. The dogs start barking crazily. YOU PILE OF POO. Mary screams and she starts to run at him. I have to grab her to stop her from getting killed. Let me kill him she screams. “Oh yes please just made it quik and let me have some last words here are some I prepared earlier” the man says with a stupid smirk on his face pulling a sheet of paper out of his pocket. I stand there out of shock. The man starts laughing hysterically. When he was distracted Mary walked up and punched him right in the jaw. He gets knocked back YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT he wails. He snps open his briefcase and pulls out a nickel plated colt 1911 and points it at Mary Be careful with that you could kill someone. That's the general ideas the man says. While this was happening I walk up behind him point a desert eagle to his head and ask would you like to volunteer. So how about those last words? You wouldn’t dare! I live in a apocalypse try me. So I pull the trigger. David falls to the ground and evaporates. Out of the dust a ghostly figure fly out and says Thank you for freeing me now can finally reunite with my true love I’M COMING KARMA!!! And she flys away.The island starts to fall apart and another hole opens up we jump in before there is nothing left to jump of. We arrive back in Mary's dimension. “Sorry you couldn’t get back to your dimension”
“That's ok i like it here anyway”
Over the next month we rebuild Mary's farm to its former glory. With my apocalyptic life behind me we lived happily ever after with Tiny's and Echos puppies until we died.
